Official Review: Waves Break (on Unknown Shores)
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Re: Official Review: Waves Break (on Unknown Shores)
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I only have one objection: When you say
"Despite the excessive profanity, Litherland delivers a suspenseful story that will keep readers guessing until the end.", there actually is no concessive relationship between the two ideas expressed; I cannot see how excessive profanity could prevent delivery of a "suspenseful story....". But maybe I am wrong.
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Sometimes, I find it difficult to judge if the swearing is excessive. It might help if you can tell us how frequent the swear words come up. Once every sentence/page/dialogue?I appreciate that Litherland seeks to portray realistic dialogues through the colorful language, but he seems to go overboard.
Thank you for your review!