Review by Alicer -- Opaque by Calix Leigh-Reign

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Review by Alicer -- Opaque by Calix Leigh-Reign

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[Following is a volunteer review of "Opaque" by Calix Leigh-Reign.]
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4 out of 4 stars
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"I exist during a time where most minds are trained, leaving very few that are free." Adam, a sixteen year old teenager shares this sentiment. His life seems dark and disturbing in a society that has come to expect certain off people. Born and raised in Piure a city of 4,000 people, he attends Keetering High school. Keetering comprises of 385 students. Adam believes the school to be over equipped for such a small number. Female students wear provocative dresses with wanting behavior. Quite ironic for Piure, known as the city of purity. Adam refers to the people of Piure as animals. He detests everyone except his mother JoAnn whom he loves and longs to spend time with. In Keetering we meet his teachers Mr. Wickerson and Brent. We also get to see his close circle of students i.e. Josh, Kane and Vikki. He dislikes Vikki who seems to follow him everywhere almost to the point of stalking. In spite of giving her hints to leave him alone Vikki seems completely blind. Adam Caspian is a great athlete. To pass off as social, he joined the school football club becoming a devoted member. He did this to opt out of counseling from his parents as a result of his introversion. Something the society deems abnormal.
Adam dark side led him to Terry a fifteen year old girl. Though he feels guilty of what transpired. He never shares what happened because he now's no one will understand.

Carly Wit a new student from Silver Springs, Minnesota joins Keetering bringing out a different side of Adam. For the first time in his life he falls in love and appreciates someone besides his mother. He longs to be with Carly, getting more eager to get to school to see her. She doesn't put a lot of make up and her dressing's modest compared to other girls in Keetering. Adam loves her more for this. Kane, Adam's classmate appears to like Carly as well. One can almost sense the beginning of conflict between the two, "Is Kane the twin brother of Adam? Opaque{i} describes Adam's character. He is not open with people and one never knows his thoughts. He loves solidarity and detest disturbance from others. We see this when he secludes himself from others at the cafeteria over lunch hour. He prefers to eat alone at the field while reading “The life and mind of a sociopath in training” by Paul Wickerson.
Calix Leigh-Reign's first book of Scion SAGA narrates the life of Adam. It's quite clear that he doesn’t get along with his father. He completely ignores his efforts to create a rapport with him. This is relatable to most teenagers who feel capable of making their own decisions. Adam doesn't usually attend parties, but Carly convinced him to attend one at Josh's.
It is easy to be judgmental toward Adam for his behavior but after learning of his birth. We can relate to who he is and understand his behavior. Our friends can make or break us it shows the importance of the right choice of circle of friends. Carly is his right choice. The character progression in this book is amazing as you read through the chapters. I have a lot of appreciation on the quality of writing for this book; excellent grammar as well. I can’t wait to read the second and third editions

I rate this book 4 out of 4{b}. It is entertaining chapter after chapter. Character build up is exquisite. It's quite relatable especially for teens. Grammar usage is to the point and the writer has rely out down herself.

The first chapters of the book were quiet dark. It almost felt like it would take the direction of a rated crime thriller.

I noted very minor mistakes other than that the book was well edited

I recommend this book to fiction lovers, adults and older teenagers due to the first chapters

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