Review of Don't Quit

[Curline Williams]

[Following is a volunteer review of "Don't Quit" by Kyle S. Reynolds.]

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5 out of 5 stars

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Don't Quit: The Jason Merkle Story: by Kyle S. Reynolds

This book is very well written and edited, with only a few editorial mistakes. The story will capture the reader from the very beginning and hold them captive until the end. It will touch your heart and challenge your mind. It is also very informative on the subject at hand. The author was able to convey the deepest emotions and turmoil that the main character, Jason, had gone through. Kyle Reynolds was able to take the reader up to the highest heights and into the lowest depths with Jason. His writing not only tells a story, but his use of the English language paints a picture that the reader can take part in. I will recommend this book to young adults and even older adults as well, especially to those who are facing the same type of situations that Jason and his family had to go through. This book can be used as a tool for information or used for inspiration during difficult times. This book is suitable for both men and women. The few mistakes that I found in the book did not take away from the story at all and they did not distract me from the storyline.
On page 120, the sentence: "The diet change alone can the biggest barrier for any patient." is missing the word "be".
On pages 143-144, the sentence: "Paperwork had to be assigned, my chemotherapy had to be repaired, and a PICC line needed to be inserted into my arm." the word here should be "prepared" not "repaired".
On page 148: "This feeling I had was one of absolute, insatiable fatigue that penetrated
each and every part of my body, from my fingers and toes to the inside of my head, where I felt a slow, dull pounding that seemingly was working to be more noticeable than the nausea the ebbed and flowed with movement and time." here the word "that" would be better than "the"
4 out of 4
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