Review by Youknowwho0 -- Containment Breach

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[Following is a volunteer review of "Containment Breach" by Wm. A. Yandell.]

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2 out of 4 stars

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"Containment breach" by WM. A. YANDELL is a story centering around Walt smithon and his team of biologists set about saving the world from " creatures" created by his mentor a genetic manipulation experiment gone horribly wrong. Smithon has a creation of his own that he must protect and keep secret at all costs.

This is a story of betrayal,a tiny pinch of romance, intelligence, courage and bravery

I found the storyline of this story fascinating although it lacked enough suspense and has a horrible attempt at romance. What I disliked about the book are the unnaturally long sentence structures, they were incredibly frustrating. They made the book really hard to pick up and they showed that the editing was nowhere near perfect.

I didn't connect with the characters in this story and it made it taxing to read the book but since this is an honest review, I would put it out there that the general storyline on its own has a potential to it but the writer didn't really pursue that and I kept reading paragraph after paragraph hoping to get a surprise in the plot.

The suspense if it had been pursued would have really set the book apart and made the book more appealing.

I rate this book 2 out of 4 stars due to the bad editing of the book and I felt that the story line should have been explored a bit more.

All in all the story has the potential of being a great book if all the writer reviews the grammar and the sentence structures.

People who enjoy fantasy, sci-fi, space stories and fiction would really enjoy this book but if you're the type that doesn't have the patience to put up with bad grammar then you shouldn't read this.

I commend the author on his efforts.

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Containment Breach
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