Review of Welcome To My Hole

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Review of Welcome To My Hole

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[Following is a volunteer review of "Welcome To My Hole" by Daniel Shea.]
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4 out of 5 stars
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The book "Welcome To My Hole" by Daniel Shea is a sensational comedy and adventure of love. It follows the story of store manager Mike, a white American man, and his former employee Bethel, who was deported to Eritrea along with her brother Solomon, a former Eritrean soldier. Solomon is against Mike's love for his sister and refuses to give his blessings for their union.

The journey begins at Mike's local Virginia store when a robber's failed attempt leads to a chaotic situation with the arrival of the police and immigration officers. Bethel and Solomon are arrested as immigrants and deported back to Eritrea.

Mike is determined to reunite with his beloved Bethel. He sets forth on a journey to look for her and embarks on a adventure with his three children - Young Dan, Naomi, and Angelina. Despite facing adversity, including imprisonment by the SAWA military, Mike's determination made his dream come true by reuniting with his beloved Bethel.

Mike's determination not only gave him love, but also made his dream of having a stylish, cultural architecture design of his house, the type of family he desired, and the life he wanted to live with his beloved lady, Bethel, a reality and fulfillment.

The beauty of the screenplay novel "Welcome to My Hole" lies in the narrative style used by the author. It vividly illustrates the rich culture of the Habesha people and provides a colorful image of Eritrea by exploring the villages of all nine tribes, including Afar, Bilen, Hedareb, Kunama, Nara, Rashaida, Saho, Tigre, and Tigrinya.

I would highly recommend this book to readers who enjoy comedic adventures and stories about the power of love. It is a refreshingly unique read that will leave you feeling both inspired and entertained. It's a must-read for anyone who loves a good laugh and a heartfelt story.

I would rate this book 4 out of 5 stars. While the story is engaging, there are some grammatical errors that could be addressed, such as "before Bethel can speak" on page 12. With professional editing to improve punctuation and grammar, this book could truly shine.

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