My New Friend

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hildah-mart86
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My New Friend

Post by hildah-mart86 » 13 Jul 2018, 02:28

Friends come and disappear
Rarely do the good ones appear
I am convinced beyond, dear
That you are rare.

People like you are scarce
For most friends create menace
But YOU dear friend, yield grace.

I ask you one thing:
That you be good like this
And ALL good, shall bring a thing.

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Post by stec1 » 13 Jul 2018, 02:38

its easy to find the bad people than the good ones

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Post by Aliasking53 » 14 Jul 2018, 16:13

Good people don't come easy.

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Post by hildah-mart86 » 17 Jul 2018, 04:50

They ( good people) are hard to find. Appreciate when you get one!

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Post by palilogy » 20 Jul 2018, 09:59

I'm curious about the speaker of this poem - there is a unique voice.
I want more - perhaps further lines and explanation are needed here.

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Post by stec1 » 15 Oct 2018, 16:11

sometimes i ask myself, why people loves bad people than the good ones?
they tends to appreciate when the bad people do something than when the good ones tries to tell the truth
then i discover that the world is full of evil and the people that lives in it does not want the truth.

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