Most beautiful girl

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Eniefiok Goodnews
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Most beautiful girl

Post by Eniefiok Goodnews » 17 May 2018, 11:59

A beauty that shines like star
Is what has always brigthen my heart
The day I set my eyes on you
Then I thought I had losed my sight
Couse your beauty shines so bright
If I can always have you in sight
Then I never want to blink my eyes
cause I never want you off my sight

hello beautiful please give me your heart
I hope you will never let mine break
Please give me your hands
Cause I never want to let you go

I will stand for you
But you must promise to stand by me
I will fight for you
But you must promise to strengthen me
it's you and I forever
Just like you and I against the world
We'll be best friends till whenever
The title can change

Very beautiful
That's not enough to describe your look
In-love
Am not sure if that might be the right word
over joy
That's what I get each time I see your face
Love
It's the force that brings us together
Ever charming
I can berely not think of you
Tell me please
Will accept my request and be the one

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Post by Agatha TK » 17 May 2018, 14:43

So great with agood flow of words
Real words explaining expressions

Eniefiok Goodnews
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Post by Eniefiok Goodnews » 20 May 2018, 00:32

thanks

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