2Faces

Use this forum to post poetry that you have written. This is for getting comments and constructive feedback. This is for original, creative works. You must post the actual text, no links. Only one poem per topic please.
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jarob
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Post by jarob » 02 May 2018, 16:53

Love is beautiful and love is ugly
that's 2 faces my coin resembles
this days love is changed love is money
my heart is racing my blood is running
the race is over I stopped loving
said I won her heart she said I lost it
but if I lost it she's were I find it
she's in my brain cell am her attorney

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Post by Akosua + » 18 May 2018, 09:44

'Where' not 'were' and 'I'm' not 'am'. But even though it's short, I like it.

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