When My Husband Touches Me

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Daniel-book
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When My Husband Touches Me

Post by Daniel-book » 30 Apr 2018, 12:57

When my husband gives me a peck,
I forget about the food on the stove,
And jump on him with my legs across his neck,
By the time we finish the food is producing smoke.

When my husband holds my waist,
I forget about the supper,
And urge him to make haste.
And go for the rubber.

When my husband kisses my forehead,
I leave the tap running in the sink,
And push him towards the bed,
By the time we finish there is no water to drink,

After sex I stay very alert,
Because he might hug me from behind,
And if he does that,
I tell him to rewind!

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HASIB234
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Post by HASIB234 » 04 May 2018, 15:02

it'svery aromatic &sexual poem.

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Post by Akosua + » 18 May 2018, 09:40

It tells of a woman who is passionately but carelessly in love with her husband. The sexual contents are straightforward and therefore inappropriate for children. I would have made the sexual content look and feel innocent

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