Circling Sunrises

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nobunkum
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Circling Sunrises

Post by nobunkum » 17 Apr 2018, 21:11

The line is bending inward.
Giving a view of the end.
Pulling in with a thin cord.
A new dawning for my friend.

The warmth of my own sunrise.
In him is renewed again.
Perfection found in dew eyes.
Love pushing out all profane.

Inked eyes gaze into emeralds.
Absorbed, the pooling ink halts.
This peace, this oneness; heralds
A world more pure than my faults.

Please hold tight to the scent of heaven's tree.
For through you my little one: I Go, to behold He.

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Post by crediblereading2 » 18 Apr 2018, 08:01

This is a truly beautiful poem which reflects the serenity of love.

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