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Use this forum to post poetry that you have written. This is for getting comments and constructive feedback. This is for original, creative works. You must post the actual text, no links. Only one poem per topic please.
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shortguytall
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Post by shortguytall » 17 Apr 2018, 03:35

On Books

A way to see the real,
Creation reveal,
And enter dimensions
Beyond the ordinary.

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Post by teacherjh » 03 May 2018, 11:39

Absolutely - this is how I feel about reading.

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Post by KatSims92 » 29 Jun 2018, 09:15

I love this. It's so simple but so profound. Good job!

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Post by ccranston » 11 Jul 2018, 02:53

Perfect description of books!
“You know you’ve read a good book when you turn the last page and feel a little as if you have lost a friend." –Paul Sweeney

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Post by palilogy » 20 Jul 2018, 10:17

I'm not sure you are saying anything new with this poem.
I have seen each of these lines before.
Consider putting more of you onto the page.

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