Disappointment

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Disappointment

Post by Amcdanel86 » 28 Dec 2016, 21:45

There is disappointment in your eyes and voice.
Doesn't matter what I say.
The disappointment is still in your voice.
My actions don't matter.
The disappointment is still in your eyes.
My happiness doesn't matter.
The disappointment still wins in the end.

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Post by Christina O Phillips » 31 Mar 2017, 14:30

Such a terrible feeling

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Post by Ninetimes » 07 May 2017, 20:29

Sighs...oh my

-- 07 May 2017, 20:32 --

Why so disappointed
Would it matter is if your wanted
What if no one accounted
For these disappointments
Would you still comment
Or simply play a blind eye to the reading content!

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Post by Jaime Lync » 09 May 2017, 15:55

This poem is so sad. I think when you see disappointment in the eyes of a loved one - that hurts.

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Post by Ama Idim » 28 Jul 2017, 03:53

Sad...

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Post by geoffrey ngoima » 12 Aug 2017, 03:49

That's a feeling to struggle with

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Post by palilogy » 11 Jun 2018, 17:42

There are very strong feelings behind this poem which compels the reader with tone.
I want to know more specifics - poems don't always have to be so poetic - they can have details =)

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Post by Ayyatullah » 15 Jun 2018, 00:44

So Sad

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Post by jake_basit995 » 18 Jun 2018, 08:00

feels like rowing the boat with a thin stick in the middle of harsh storms. Disappointments are like waves

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Post by Lizbeth2 » 18 Jun 2018, 18:19

Yeah disappointment comes and time and trust me that feeling is terrible

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