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Rainbows

Posted: 19 Nov 2015, 23:44
by Muggy_Maggy
I let go,
and it all flies away.
I hold on,
and it molds like clay.
but slippery hands
let loose the strings
that hold beauty
down with wings.

Re: Rainbows

Posted: 02 Dec 2015, 18:12
by stanley
Nifty little poem, I think. I like its succinct economy and credible rhyme. I'm not sure, though, how the last word, "wings" works, whether it is that beauty has wings or that wings somehow hold down beauty (...or both?)

Re: Rainbows

Posted: 30 Sep 2016, 17:16
by Genaaa
I really like the meaning behind this. Good job.