Paranormal Elements
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I did enjoy the paranormal elements. I do enjoy time travel stories, but don't typically enjoy other forms of the paranormal. I found the author used such elements in a unique way that held my interest.bookowlie wrote: ↑01 Jun 2018, 09:20 Did you enjoy the paranormal elements of the story? Would the plot have worked as well without the supernatural tie-ins between the three time periods? I don't usually like this genre, but the author did a good job of using it to advance the plot. I think the story would have had a more serious, realistic tone without the paranormal aspects.
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These are really good points! I hate when the coincidence is too strong, it makes the story less powerful.Miriam Molina wrote: ↑05 Jun 2018, 18:05 The mystery wouldn't be solved without the paranormal stuff. In this story, the ghosts even come alive and participate in the present-day action.
I just found too much coincidence, especially when Casa del Sole turns out to have been owned by Sophia's family. Too convenient.
The scene between Angela and the old woman is also unrealistic. In my opinion, the "sin" was too petty to have caused such an impact on the mother-daughter relationship.
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Absolutely agree! Angela and Alex had nowhere to go with their investigation past meeting Sophia's daughter. That experience was only useful because it resulted in a vision.cristinaro wrote: ↑04 Jun 2018, 07:52 I don't know what would have happened with this book if the paranormal elements had not been right there to keep it together. Although Angela's blackouts seem ridiculous at times, they make the time switches possible and provide clues to find the missing painting. I also have the feeling Belle Ami plans to exploit them further in the next books of the series.
In general I enjoyed the paranormal aspect of the book. I always enjoy getting glimpses of more historical characters if an author has a meaningful way of tying them in.
I do disagree with bookowlie though about the story being more serious without the paranormal element. I think Angela's experiences with Giuliano and Gerhard's death actually made the book more serious than it might have been otherwise. It really prompted Angela to worry about Alex and take the threats facing them more seriously.
I think the way everything turns out in the cave is a bit overdone though. I saw it coming but wish Angela and Alex had been able to defeat the bad guys without supernatural assistance.
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Do you think it would have been better if all of the visions actually only happened as dreams in the normal course of Angela sleeping? I thought her just being struck with a vision was a little annoying from time to time. It also made it seem like Sophia and Fioretta weren't concerned with Angela's well-being.Zain A Blade wrote: ↑08 Jun 2018, 14:40 Exactly my sentiments. The paranormal element simply made the book look unserious. The flashback to the generations past was ok and it fits well with the storyline, but not the psychedelic stuff. The book would have been up there with the likes of the Da Vinci code without all the crazies.
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Absolutely. It struck me as odd that Alex and Angela just accepted that they were (at least) a third reincarnation and that was apparently the only possibility. They also seemed to think that because they had been lovers in past lives that meant they were destined to be so again.thaservices1 wrote: ↑06 Jun 2018, 18:01 The paranormal aspect was so integral to the story, it's the only way it could work without actually making the book a mystery/thriller as it is wrongly labeled. The characters reactions to the paranormal are what bothered me. For non-believers they take it all in stride a bit too easily. Angela is a pretty 'normal' character, I feel her reaction should have been a lot more panicked.
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I felt the same way. I would have liked the final confrontation to be fought fair and square, without the ghosts stepping in. The whole story was "managed" by them - pointing Alex and Angela in the right direction, providing the clues and helping them escape danger.kfwilson6 wrote: ↑12 Jun 2018, 20:24Absolutely agree! Angela and Alex had nowhere to go with their investigation past meeting Sophia's daughter. That experience was only useful because it resulted in a vision.cristinaro wrote: ↑04 Jun 2018, 07:52 I don't know what would have happened with this book if the paranormal elements had not been right there to keep it together. Although Angela's blackouts seem ridiculous at times, they make the time switches possible and provide clues to find the missing painting. I also have the feeling Belle Ami plans to exploit them further in the next books of the series.
In general I enjoyed the paranormal aspect of the book. I always enjoy getting glimpses of more historical characters if an author has a meaningful way of tying them in.
I do disagree with bookowlie though about the story being more serious without the paranormal element. I think Angela's experiences with Giuliano and Gerhard's death actually made the book more serious than it might have been otherwise. It really prompted Angela to worry about Alex and take the threats facing them more seriously.
I think the way everything turns out in the cave is a bit overdone though. I saw it coming but wish Angela and Alex had been able to defeat the bad guys without supernatural assistance.
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I enjoyed this too. It makes me think of the movie Ever After. I think that is a major part of why I wish there had been more about Fioretta and Giuliano. I actually just wanted to see more about da Vinci. He is portrayed really well in that particular movie and it's always sort of made me imagine him as brilliant, awkward, and quirky.Bookmermaid wrote: ↑10 Jun 2018, 20:51 I am currently reading the book but not particularly enjoying the paranormal events. However, I enjoy reading about the imagined lifestyles of the great artist Da Vinci and his close friends.