Panick Attacks for first reviews?
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Panick Attacks for first reviews?
I am not experienced in writing reviews, but it has been a dream of mine to see part of my review on the jacket of a book or published anywhere. My punctuation skills are not up to par. I do not want to write a review that may cause any unjust to the book or author. Clearly you can see that I'm not sure whether the comma goes after or before but. The same goes for semicolons and just about everything inbetween.
Has anyone dealt with these same issues? Does anyone have any advice on a website where I can freshen up on basic grammar skills? Anything more informative other than grammar check on MSword would help! I will appreciate any other constructive information also...
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A semicolon works like a period. You can use it as a pause rather than an ending to a sentence.
I ran inside. I grabbed my purse.
I ran inside; I grabbed my purse.
Always put the comma BEFORE but. There will generally NEVER be a comma after but.
I wanted to go, but I was sick.
The colon comes before a list.
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Both of these authors have extremely helpful websites.
http://www.grammarphobia.com/
http://www.quickanddirtytips.com/grammar-girl
Keep in mind that these two books focus on U.S. English writing rules and do not take into account British writing.
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First, don't stress. Pick a book you think you'll enjoy for the simple pleasure of reading it. Don't think about the review when you're picking the book. Pick a genre that you tend to read anyway so you're more likely to enjoy the book. For instance, don't pick a sci-fi book if you've never read one you liked - you probably won't like it.quadbrokie45 wrote:I have waited and today is my turn to choose a book to read for a review... Everytime I think about clicking the commit button I feel completely overwhelmed. I don't think this is normal.
Second, this is not a personal assessment of the author, but an objective review of the story. What did you like? What didn't you like? What worked or what didn't? I personally highlight passages or quotes while I read that I want to refer back to later when I'm writing the review. I don't usually make notes unless it's something that really engages me or confuses me, but the highlight (or sticky tab if it's a print book) is usually enough to jog my memory.I do not want to write a review that may cause any unjust to the book or author.
Purdue University's Online Writing Lab has both MLA and APA format guides typically used by colleges and universities. It can be found here: https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/Does anyone have any advice on a website where I can freshen up on basic grammar skills? Anything more informative other than grammar check on MSword would help!
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Well said. Try to enjoy the process.rssllue wrote:I think the biggest thing to remember, is that there are people on here that will help you to improve with every review you write. The comments that they give have helped me to see where I can improve my subsequent review each and every time. They take the time to help us see where we can shore up some weaknesses, but also give encouragement in our strengths. Just like anything else, you will get better with practice, so just start writing them and go from there! Don't forget to have fun too! You are doing the author a great service by reviewing their book. It is very cool!
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Does there have to be a comma in front of the but, or is it optional? <hehe; the exception that proves the rule> I used to use the comma in front of the but; however, this does not seem to be an accepted standard at my job in official correspondence and documents, so I have been trained back out of the habit of using a comma in that particular place.
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Thank you! And agreed!bookowlie wrote:Well said. Try to enjoy the process.rssllue wrote:I think the biggest thing to remember, is that there are people on here that will help you to improve with every review you write. The comments that they give have helped me to see where I can improve my subsequent review each and every time. They take the time to help us see where we can shore up some weaknesses, but also give encouragement in our strengths. Just like anything else, you will get better with practice, so just start writing them and go from there! Don't forget to have fun too! You are doing the author a great service by reviewing their book. It is very cool!
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I have never heard of an accepted standard in any office where you wouldn't put a comma before but. The only exception is when there is a contrast with no verb - example: It was a warm but windy night.anonanemone wrote:Thank you for posting this topic. I am thinking that this is a more normal situation for first time reviewers than you think. I am having the same problem. I have been looking over the books available for review for a couple of days. And yet, here I am posting on the forum instead of pushing the button right away to commit to the book I've chosen. I know I am also worried about meeting the standards and taking good notes while I read. I am not used to approaching books from that direction. On the other hand, I am excited and ready to get to the steady improvement.
Does there have to be a comma in front of the but, or is it optional? <hehe; the exception that proves the rule> I used to use the comma in front of the but; however, this does not seem to be an accepted standard at my job in official correspondence and documents, so I have been trained back out of the habit of using a comma in that particular place.
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You are very eloquent sometimes in your Russellness.rssllue wrote:Thank you! And agreed!bookowlie wrote:Well said. Try to enjoy the process.rssllue wrote:I think the biggest thing to remember, is that there are people on here that will help you to improve with every review you write. The comments that they give have helped me to see where I can improve my subsequent review each and every time. They take the time to help us see where we can shore up some weaknesses, but also give encouragement in our strengths. Just like anything else, you will get better with practice, so just start writing them and go from there! Don't forget to have fun too! You are doing the author a great service by reviewing their book. It is very cool!
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Don't worry so much. The guidelines are not really that cumbersome. As for pushing the button and committing to a book, we all go through that, I think. I even get a little nervous before pushing the buttom to submit my review and again when submitting the ending blurb. It's still an enjoyable process to read and review books!anonanemone wrote:Thank you for posting this topic. I am thinking that this is a more normal situation for first time reviewers than you think. I am having the same problem. I have been looking over the books available for review for a couple of days. And yet, here I am posting on the forum instead of pushing the button right away to commit to the book I've chosen. I know I am also worried about meeting the standards and taking good notes while I read. I am not used to approaching books from that direction. On the other hand, I am excited and ready to get to the steady improvement.
Does there have to be a comma in front of the but, or is it optional? <hehe; the exception that proves the rule> I used to use the comma in front of the but; however, this does not seem to be an accepted standard at my job in official correspondence and documents, so I have been trained back out of the habit of using a comma in that particular place.