Overall rating and opinion of "Cynthia and Dan: Cyber War" by Dorothy May Mercer
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Re: Overall rating and opinion of "Cynthia and Dan: Cyber War" by Dorothy May Mercer
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I thought the character development was haphazard as well. Made me wonder if the book actually has two authors.heatherashley7 wrote: ↑01 Jun 2019, 17:15 My overall opinion is very poor, I felt the flow of the book was choppy at best with two competing plot lines. I enjoyed the cyber war part of the book and found it interesting, but hard to follow. Cynthia's love life was poorly written and thrown in I think to give it more of an appeal, which it lacked.
The development of the characters were another issue for me as they were thoughtless. Sky was unbelievable at best, as he was supposed to be a major in the armed forces but reduced to nothing more than a stalker, and love sick schoolboy. These characteristics truly turned me off from the character. Dan was only introduced in a negative and stalking light with no clear ending which disturbed me as well. The author attempted to make Cynthia this independent woman, but at the same time ditzy and clueless.
If it weren't for the adult themes I would possibly recommend this for a teenager, but I would not recommend it to another adult.
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On a positive note, the cyber war aspect was interesting and surprisingly believable. I plan to read next in series to find out more about this part of the story. I'm probably going to skip the garbage about Sky and Cynthia simply because it was too weird...
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I didn't like the way Sky showed up 'not recommending' abortion/miscarriage, but at the same time, procuring all the drugs necessary to cause it.
The cover, although it was appropriate considering the 'cloud' aspect of the digital age, lacked personality enough to draw a reader at first glance.
Also: Can anyone tell me how my review of this book got posted as a topic (which cannot be replied to) on the review forum, while it still has not been published yet? I didn't post it, so I'm curious. Great discussion everyone! I appreciate your opinions and input!
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