What Mood Do Your Poems Have?
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What Mood Do Your Poems Have?
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yeah, I think I agree. But sometimes I'll write something as random as can be -- totally off the wall, knee-slapping-ish HILARIOUS. I had usually been drinking during thoseLoveHatesYou wrote:Mine is extremely pensive- and usually depressing, but I think that is because I use it as an outlet, a means for expressing my fears and doubts about myself and the world around me.
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And when you dream I hope you can't sleep and you SCREAM about it
I hope your conscience EATS AT YOU and you can't BREATHE without me"
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However, I also write when I'm in my happiest feeling, also about my dreams. When I write that way, my poem style tends to be romantic.
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When We Were Young
When we were young, love was so new
How to handle these feelings, I had not a clue
There you were all radiant like the shining sun
I was drawn to you in love, it so much fun
Yet I was shy and unsure of myself
A simple greeting was nearly impossible for me
As I watched you from a distance
I suddenly realized this love may never be
When we were young, I felt ever so close to you
As you walked off the bus, afar off is where I stood
Watching from the school hall window
Begging to call out to you if I could
Why was it so hard to express these feelings so true?
What could I have done to get closer to you?
As I passed you in the hallway time and again
I could only raise my head and offer a simple grin
Now as I look back, it’s all in the past
I am older, wiser and sure of life's many wonders
Still at times, I like to think of you during the setting sun
Wondering about the girl I knew we were young
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