To rhyme or not to rhyme...?
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Re: To rhyme or not to rhyme...?
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-- 17 Jun 2014, 20:30 --
To me, when I write a poem or song, it often have a rhythm, it seldoms rhymes, as if it has a flow or a beat that tries to find the notes to express itself stronger, with more feeling or emotion.
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Sure they can.
"when a poet allows him or herself to expand their horizons past a set meter, their words have a much deeper meaning, "
Why would the meaning of the words change, the thoughts and feelings that engendered the poem have a deeper meaning simply because of a different format of writing?
Do you think villanelles have deeper meanings than pantoums or sonnets or vice versa?
No, "anyone" can't write a rhyming poem. In my view it is far more difficult to do so than to merely cobble together a few sentences, leave out the punctuation and call it free verse.
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Free verse poems (good free verse) still employ many disciplined techniques. So, if you write free verse do not feel like you aren't writing "real" poetry. Remember though that poetry should at all times be pleasing to read and listen to, and there are certain poetic devices that can make a piece more enjoyable for a reader. Rhyming is one of these devices.
Hope that helps!
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The bad rhymed ones tend to have rhymes that sound forced, cheesy, or trite. Rhymes should feel natural, not as if the poet went out of his or her way to get the rhyme.
With the bad unrhymed ones, it looks as if the poet just took some random thoughts and wrote them down in a vertical instead of a horizontal format.
With or without a strict form, a poem should have strong images in it, and it should have something to say. Also, the words should get along well together, better than they do in natural speech.
That said, I agree with you that following a formal meter or rhyme scheme is helpful. Especially for beginning poets, it can train us and lead us on in our skills. Sure, we will produce some clunkers, but the more metered, rhymed poetry we write, the more natural it will become ... and the better equipped we'll be to write decent free-form poems.
I've seen people speak derisively of rhymed poetry, as if it were passe or amateur. I think that's ridiculous.
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If it is a well rhymed poem it is always better for me. But it shouldn't be forced, though.
― Paulo Coelho, The Alchemist
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