What do they want

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Mavovo
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What do they want

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What do they want

Anywhere you go I see you
I have followers everywhere
Any God given gift I have
I use it to lure you in
My workers charm you and agree you
How can you deny me
I hurt your dreams and torment your mind
You, who was born of courage and stregnth
Your knee I will bow
I blind you of your life with panic and fear
I am a demon with no soul
It's your life and soul I must pull
It's you who must fulfill my story.
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very romantic.
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Fantastic
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Post by Noraine Alissa Poria »

This is such a wonderful poem. I hope you'll write more of this kind of poems.
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While unrelated to the message of this poem, this reminded me of the Michelle Branch song "Everywhere"
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I like this poem, it sounds like the lyrics to a song. Have you ever considered songwriting?
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You must have a very strong inspiration behind this poem since it is clearly made with feelings and all
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