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haidwa meru
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Its been days and months
since I saw your face
All the love and joy we had
now its gone
and I miss those day
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Geestephaniee
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Love it i can relate
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palilogy
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Interesting - I feel you have a story to tell
Consider using more specifics and steering clear from cliches and generalizations
You have the material inside of you to create an amazing poem - use it =)
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Very touching, reminds mw of someone I miss so much
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