Lost love
- Prissy16
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Lost love
There's no fire and no smoke,
All I'm left with is ashes from the past,
Neither does that love nor it's memories remain,
There was such a burning fire in my heart
But nothing is there nothing is remained,
Whose picture I see in my eyes always,
I'm not the same loving person but it's quite like a grave....
PR
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this is exactly the emotions and ups and downs that I go through every day...
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What a beautiful poem how the poet is saying i'm just now ash and i don't remember any memories and how beautifully he is saying that maybe i'm still not the same may be i'm like dead manPrissy16 wrote: ↑19 Apr 2018, 11:46 I wonder what my eyes keep searching for in me ..
There's no fire and no smoke,
All I'm left with is ashes from the past,
Neither does that love nor it's memories remain,
There was such a burning fire in my heart
But nothing is there nothing is remained,
Whose picture I see in my eyes always,
I'm not the same loving person but it's quite like a grave....
PR
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So much emotion... I can actually picture myself in the poem ... expressing love but not getting the same love backPrissy16 wrote: ↑19 Apr 2018, 11:46 I wonder what my eyes keep searching for in me ..
There's no fire and no smoke,
All I'm left with is ashes from the past,
Neither does that love nor it's memories remain,
There was such a burning fire in my heart
But nothing is there nothing is remained,
Whose picture I see in my eyes always,
I'm not the same loving person but it's quite like a grave....
PR