Disappointment

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Disappointment

Post by Aohanlon86 »

There is disappointment in your eyes and voice.
Doesn't matter what I say.
The disappointment is still in your voice.
My actions don't matter.
The disappointment is still in your eyes.
My happiness doesn't matter.
The disappointment still wins in the end.
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Such a terrible feeling
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Post by Ninetimes »

Sighs...oh my

-- 07 May 2017, 20:32 --

Why so disappointed
Would it matter is if your wanted
What if no one accounted
For these disappointments
Would you still comment
Or simply play a blind eye to the reading content!
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Post by Jaime Lync »

This poem is so sad. I think when you see disappointment in the eyes of a loved one - that hurts.
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Sad...
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That's a feeling to struggle with
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There are very strong feelings behind this poem which compels the reader with tone.
I want to know more specifics - poems don't always have to be so poetic - they can have details =)
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Post by Ayyatullah »

So Sad
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Post by jake_basit995 »

feels like rowing the boat with a thin stick in the middle of harsh storms. Disappointments are like waves
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Post by Lizbeth2 »

Yeah disappointment comes and time and trust me that feeling is terrible
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Very sad poem..disappointment is a very lonely thing..
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Very sad poem
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Post by Neppi_reads »

Amcdanel86 wrote: 28 Dec 2016, 21:45 There is disappointment in your eyes and voice.
Doesn't matter what I say.
The disappointment is still in your voice.
My actions don't matter.
The disappointment is still in your eyes.
My happiness doesn't matter.
The disappointment still wins in the end.
Such sad poem! However love your choice of words and how you've ended the poem nicely! Awesome job.
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Post by Eriny Youssef »

Felt that, unfortunate feeling.
Keep writing 🙌🏼
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Ninetimes wrote: 07 May 2017, 20:29 Sighs...oh my

-- 07 May 2017, 20:32 --

Why so disappointed
Would it matter is if your wanted
What if no one accounted
For these disappointments
Would you still comment
Or simply play a blind eye to the reading content!
This is so cool. Well done
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