Disappointment
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Disappointment
Doesn't matter what I say.
The disappointment is still in your voice.
My actions don't matter.
The disappointment is still in your eyes.
My happiness doesn't matter.
The disappointment still wins in the end.
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-- 07 May 2017, 20:32 --
Why so disappointed
Would it matter is if your wanted
What if no one accounted
For these disappointments
Would you still comment
Or simply play a blind eye to the reading content!
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I want to know more specifics - poems don't always have to be so poetic - they can have details =)
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Such sad poem! However love your choice of words and how you've ended the poem nicely! Awesome job.Amcdanel86 wrote: ↑28 Dec 2016, 21:45 There is disappointment in your eyes and voice.
Doesn't matter what I say.
The disappointment is still in your voice.
My actions don't matter.
The disappointment is still in your eyes.
My happiness doesn't matter.
The disappointment still wins in the end.
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