IN LOVE WITH A PRISONER By Apochi Timmy, 2016

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IN LOVE WITH A PRISONER By Apochi Timmy, 2016

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IN LOVE WITH A PRISONER
By Apochi Timmy, 2016

Cage so perfectly knitted like birds'
No comfort of cushion nor bed
Badly fed with expired goods
No freedom to good life and goals

Speeches is being limited
Words is being counted
Gazes is being noticed
Movement is being monitored

I remember when we we met years
Even as air of the prison yells
What is mine, was mine
Even when I tried to hide

Emotion, killed with torture
Skin, roughed by wipes of the Scourger
Complexion changed to black dye
Weight and hips reduced to eye balls

But I still choose only you
You, you and because it's you
You beauty is radiating in my eyes
My love for you never dies

Ageing in month and days
Fading away like a pot of clay
Face changed to distant eyes
Height increased on hunger scale

I'm so much for ready to pull the fence
We shall run away with no offence
We shall stay off this dark place
To my arm waiting palace
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I love it it's interesting
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I love this I can actually really relate to this
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Post by Edgar Alan Arpafo »

I love the thought brought by the author, the message is deep.

But I think there is something wrong with the grammar
the 3rd to the last stanza must be "Your beauty"

over all the message is outstanding, keep up the good work!
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Thank you all
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Very P O W E R F U L ! 👏
And another book was opened, which is the Book of Life. (Revelation 20:12 (NKJV) :reading-7:
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'my love for you never dies', you said it all there..Lovely poem
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Post by Jaunty John »

Enlightened! this is a masterpiece of pulchritude.
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