Oblivious Queen

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Poll ended at 20 Aug 2018, 12:26

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ERhemz21
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Oblivious Queen

Post by ERhemz21 » 21 Jul 2018, 12:26

A queen only bows to her king*
I do hope they they don't forget their kins*
Royalty shouldn't be so mean*
Only God won't make you misqoute me*
Life taught lessons to oblivious queens who forget their origin*
Forget the main source and superbia won't let them go on their knees*
To serve the meal now a sin and you say that's not mean*
Maturity at it's peak
I hope they learn to give the king the bow when they speak*
And somehow this word will enter them like that of a syringe*
© ERhemz

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Post by imSunshine » 19 May 2019, 06:34

Realistic poem, i like the true to life facts about this work..

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Post by ERhemz21 » 12 Jun 2019, 18:36

Thank you @imSunshine

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