Commas. Yes, no, maybe so?
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Commas. Yes, no, maybe so?
I was shocked to discover how old some of my favorite authors that still write are now.
Or should I just say
"I was shocked to discover how old some of my favorite authors are that still write"?
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"I was shocked to discover how old some of my favorite actively writing authors are now."
or somehow break it up like this:
"I was shocked to discover how old some of my favorite authors are now, and I'm surprised that they're still writing at their ages."
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But kaymontacell, I think yours is the best idea. Rephrase it entirely. "Actively writing authors" is complimentary and makes my point, so thank you.