Coordinating conjunctions and commas
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Coordinating conjunctions and commas
I'm back for yet more comma questions
Let's use the sentence:
I went for a walk in the park, and I brought my dog with me.
So, it's correct to say that because the two phrases
1 I went for a walk in the park
2 I brought my dog with me
can stand on their own as complete sentences (independent clauses) - the comma is needed before the and?
My ACTUAL question is this: What is the difference between an independent, and a dependent clause? If the sentence were to read, "I went for a walk in the park, but it was a bad idea because it looked like rain," (but now being the coordinating conjunction) would the second phrase be independent, or dependent? It needs the first phrase to make sense, but it can also stand on its own.
Is it sometimes maybe a bit subjective?
Does it mean that it can stand COMPLETELY alone and make sense?
Or does it mean it can stand alone in the context of the writing and make sense?
Editors have marked me down for both types, so now obviously I come seeking guidance.
Ok, I think that's all.
Commas are the end of my life.
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You have the correct idea that an independent clause can stand on its own, but a dependent clause needs to be joined to an independent clause.Bianka Walter wrote: ↑24 Jun 2018, 04:12 Hello everyone!
I'm back for yet more comma questions
My ACTUAL question is this: What is the difference between an independent, and a dependent clause? If the sentence were to read, "I went for a walk in the park, but it was a bad idea because it looked like rain," (but now being the coordinating conjunction) would the second phrase be independent, or dependent? It needs the first phrase to make sense, but it can also stand on its own.
Is it sometimes maybe a bit subjective?
Dependent clauses are clauses (they have a subject and a verb) that also have a subordinate conjunction like because, although, when, and if to name a few. In your example sentence, "I went for a walk in the park, but it was a bad idea because it looked like rain," because it looked like rain is a dependent clause.
The general comma rule for dependent clauses is to use a comma after a dependent clause as when it begins a sentence but do not use a comma before a dependent clause that ends a sentence as in your example.
A sentence with a dependent clause and an independent clause is called a complex sentence. I hope this helps.
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This definitely helps! Thanks so much. I'm slowly getting there when it comes to my comma placement. I've also learnt that if I'm unsure, I should just scrap the sentence and try something elsejgraney8 wrote: ↑30 Jun 2018, 19:59You have the correct idea that an independent clause can stand on its own, but a dependent clause needs to be joined to an independent clause.Bianka Walter wrote: ↑24 Jun 2018, 04:12 Hello everyone!
I'm back for yet more comma questions
My ACTUAL question is this: What is the difference between an independent, and a dependent clause? If the sentence were to read, "I went for a walk in the park, but it was a bad idea because it looked like rain," (but now being the coordinating conjunction) would the second phrase be independent, or dependent? It needs the first phrase to make sense, but it can also stand on its own.
Is it sometimes maybe a bit subjective?
Dependent clauses are clauses (they have a subject and a verb) that also have a subordinate conjunction like because, although, when, and if to name a few. In your example sentence, "I went for a walk in the park, but it was a bad idea because it looked like rain," because it looked like rain is a dependent clause.
The general comma rule for dependent clauses is to use a comma after a dependent clause as when it begins a sentence but do not use a comma before a dependent clause that ends a sentence as in your example.
A sentence with a dependent clause and an independent clause is called a complex sentence. I hope this helps.
It helps to know what I'm looking for, thanks!
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Hello,jgraney8 wrote: ↑30 Jun 2018, 19:59You have the correct idea that an independent clause can stand on its own, but a dependent clause needs to be joined to an independent clause.Bianka Walter wrote: ↑24 Jun 2018, 04:12 Hello everyone!
I'm back for yet more comma questions
My ACTUAL question is this: What is the difference between an independent, and a dependent clause? If the sentence were to read, "I went for a walk in the park, but it was a bad idea because it looked like rain," (but now being the coordinating conjunction) would the second phrase be independent, or dependent? It needs the first phrase to make sense, but it can also stand on its own.
Is it sometimes maybe a bit subjective?
Dependent clauses are clauses (they have a subject and a verb) that also have a subordinate conjunction like because, although, when, and if to name a few. In your example sentence, "I went for a walk in the park, but it was a bad idea because it looked like rain," because it looked like rain is a dependent clause.
The general comma rule for dependent clauses is to use a comma after a dependent clause as when it begins a sentence but do not use a comma before a dependent clause that ends a sentence as in your example.
A sentence with a dependent clause and an independent clause is called a complex sentence. I hope this helps.
Can I ask: What part of the sentence is "but it was a bad idea"
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The clause,"but it was a bad idea," is an independent clause.FictionLover wrote: ↑01 Jul 2018, 19:09
Hello,
Can I ask: What part of the sentence is "but it was a bad idea"
The sentence "I went for a walk in the park, but it was a bad idea because it looked like rain." is a compound-complex sentence consisting of two independent clauses joined by a coordinating conjunction but and a dependent clause "because it looked like rain."
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I did an online course a few months ago to improve my grammar, and I focused on commas. But I still make mistakes.
They are buggers!!
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For me, when I use a coordinating conjunction and continue writing, I sometimes forget to return to put the comma in.FictionLover wrote: ↑02 Jul 2018, 07:43I did an online course a few months ago to improve my grammar, and I focused on commas. But I still make mistakes.
They are buggers!!
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The majority of the time I spend revising my reviews is spent on checking commas. I start to question myself. On the current book I am reviewing there have been quite a few sentences where I thought a comma was missing between two independent clauses. When I see that many I start to wonder if I am missing an exception or are they from another country? The BOTD a couple of days ago was written by a guy in Britain I think, and they do single and double quotes opposite the US.
I try to split my sentence up into two sentences to help me. Can you say:
I went for a walk in the park.
It was a bad idea because it looked like rain.
Both sentences make sense on their own regardless of context. You don't know what "it" is without context, but if you replace it with whatever it references, the sentences make sense. Going for a walk in the park was a bad idea because it looked like rain.
I don't know if that helps. Because then you could do the same with "It was a bad idea because it looked like rain." "It was a bad idea" and "It looked like rain" also make sense on their own but because statements are not part of the "separate two independent clauses with a comma" rule.
AHHHH, I think I just drove myself nuts trying to help. So many rules!
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I've just bought myself a book on grammar.kfwilson6 wrote: ↑06 Jul 2018, 08:31AHHHH, I think I just drove myself nuts trying to help. So many rules!
I'm not even kidding.
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Yes, when in doubt, simplify!kfwilson6 wrote: ↑06 Jul 2018, 08:31The majority of the time I spend revising my reviews is spent on checking commas. I start to question myself. On the current book I am reviewing there have been quite a few sentences where I thought a comma was missing between two independent clauses. When I see that many I start to wonder if I am missing an exception or are they from another country? The BOTD a couple of days ago was written by a guy in Britain I think, and they do single and double quotes opposite the US.
I try to split my sentence up into two sentences to help me. Can you say:
I went for a walk in the park.
It was a bad idea because it looked like rain.
Both sentences make sense on their own regardless of context. You don't know what "it" is without context, but if you replace it with whatever it references, the sentences make sense. Going for a walk in the park was a bad idea because it looked like rain.
I don't know if that helps. Because then you could do the same with "It was a bad idea because it looked like rain." "It was a bad idea" and "It looked like rain" also make sense on their own but because statements are not part of the "separate two independent clauses with a comma" rule.
AHHHH, I think I just drove myself nuts trying to help. So many rules!
What has been make me crazy lately, is (what I consider) the misuse of ellipses. OMG, why is it that in e-books, they are used so much? They are supposed to be for missing words, or to represent a trailing off in conversation. Like, "I'm not sure, let me think. . .oh, well." Or some other phrase where there really is a reason why someone would stop talking for a few seconds.
I see them over and over again, where it looks like a comma would do just find. Commas mean a pause. Why are there all these extra pauses in the dialog?
I've had someone say to me,"People, talk like that." "No. No, they don't." We have enough punctuation to adequately represent how people speak. I'd rather see the "You. Don't. Say." kind of thing. At least that is what the person is doing with their speech.
Rant over.
I went to the park, and it was a rainy day.
Is there any english grammar site or excerpt text that lectures where tok place commas properly?
Thank you in advance.
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Here is a pretty good one that I used to recommend for my students. http://www.chompchomp.com/menu.htm
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