Question about structure?

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Question about structure?

Post by Insightsintobooks729 » 15 Dec 2017, 11:46

I'm writing a review and I'm not sure if I'm writing it correctly. Here is the part I'm stuck with:

Each chapter begins with a "myth" such as, "Magic happens randomly to me". It then goes on to tell a story from the author's life that dispels that myth and reveals the truth.

Is it okay to start a new sentance after "to me" as I did or should I should I say "to me", it then goes....."?? Any help is appreciated, thank you.
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Post by kandscreeley » 15 Dec 2017, 12:17

I would start a new sentence if I were you. (That is if I'm understanding you correctly.)
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Post by Insightsintobooks729 » 15 Dec 2017, 12:35

kandscreeley wrote:
15 Dec 2017, 12:17
I would start a new sentence if I were you. (That is if I'm understanding you correctly.)

Thank you very much. That's what I thought as well, but wasn't sure.
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Post by Rosemary Wright » 16 Dec 2017, 06:52

I hope I got you right. You should start a new sentence after the "........ to me."

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Post by knelly » 23 Dec 2017, 23:11

Yes!!! . You should start a new sentence after "to me" to compliment the sentence structure .

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