Oxford Comma ~ Yes or No?
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Re: Oxford Comma ~ Yes or No?
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A great and frightening fireball burst from nowhere and tumbled along the ground, rushing and billowing. The last plane tried to pull up to get clear but it was too close and was swept into the path of destruction. Fragments of metal and plastic and pieces of things I didn’t want to recognize bounced into the air and scattered debris across the field everywhere with flashing and sparking and the roar of sudden flames.
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The crash trucks were already rolling and Trent was running toward the wreckage. The yelling continued until I realized that I was the one yelling.
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"We are going to learn to cut and paste kids!" or "We are going to learn to cut and paste, kids!"
Commas matter.
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Your family sounds fabulous!FantasyWriter655 wrote:I don't know how people get away without using the Oxford comma. My family would have my head on a spit if I didn't use it to it's full potential.
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