Comma usage
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Comma usage
2) I grew worried towards the end when none of Anaya's problems reached a resolution[,] before remembering this was part of a series!
3) I[,] therefore[,] rate this book a 3 out of 4.
I have been receiving a lot of points off for the use or non-use of commas. I do not know the grammatical terms, but I can usually tell when a sentence is wrong or not by looking at it. Senior year of high school, I scored a perfect 36/36 on the English portion of the ACT, so I am having a hard time understanding why my commas are being marked wrong so often. I have not scored well in my first 3 reviews, and this last one was rejected. The above remarks are all I recieved as feedback. Sentence one and two I used the commas, while sentence 3 I did not.
Can someone explain to me what is wrong with these commas?
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Thank you for the insights. I think I'll also benefit from researching about comma usage with interrupters, restrictive clause, and restrictive clause.kandscreeley wrote: ↑12 Mar 2022, 10:02 I can tell you that the third one is an interrupter which should be offset by commas. If you Google interrupters (I would add the word grammar because the interrupters are apparently a band as well), you'll find some good information. As for errors one and two, you would have to determine if it's a restrictive or non-restrictive clause. You can Google that to find the punctuation rules. However, it isn't always clear if it's restrictive or non-restrictive. Hope that helps some.
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For the most part, you don't need a comma before and unless what comes after could be a complete sentence.Ntokozo Joy wrote: ↑18 Mar 2022, 11:23 I have met similar feedback. There's also the issue of a comma before 'and', left me wondering if there were updated grammar rules I needed to familiarise myself with.
For example:
I went to the store, and I got milk.
I went to the store and got milk.
Both correct.
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