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Dolor, it really must be stated,
your sympathy's appreciated,
and your offer's very kind,
nice that I am on your mind,
But I'll keep watch, I think I should
and the fresh air will do me good,
and stop me from going mental
dwelling on my problems dental,
here I am and here I stay,
and I'm not going to go away!
An Eye for an Eye only ends up making the whole world blind.

Mahatma Gandhi
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It's like I'm listening to a fairy tale which keeps on convincing me to stay. ๐Ÿ˜‚
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When life seems far too dull and hard
see me as your Sheherezade,
I will tell tales and verses write,
gladly for you, by day or night,
and will be honoured so to do,
so just one thing I ask of you,
accept that I deserve it most,
and let me claim that nice last post!
An Eye for an Eye only ends up making the whole world blind.

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Wow! Excellent poem! If there will be any contest in poem writing, I'd gladly tell you. I am your number 1 fan. ๐Ÿ™‹๐Ÿผโ€โ™€๏ธ ๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽ‰
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Now I'm blushing, as I've read
the nice and flattering things you've said,
Do I deserve this compliment,
made with sweet and kind intent?
Probably not, but as you see,
I will accept it graciously,
knowing it means even more
from my lovely friend Dolor,
so now I feel I'm being mean
with what I type upon this screen,
but - here's truth's cold icy blast,
sorry, my friend, but I'll be last!
An Eye for an Eye only ends up making the whole world blind.

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๐Ÿ‘ Excellent! You never failed to amuse me with your poems. ๐Ÿ…๐ŸŽ๐Ÿ†๐Ÿฅ‡
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Kind words, as ever, dear Dolor,
but it makes me even more
determined I shall stand my ground
whilst others blithely mill around,
because, you see, it is my fate
to be the keeper of the gate
so that countless others may
take a verse upon their way.
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Lincolnshirelass wrote: โ†‘14 Dec 2017, 03:29 Kind words, as ever, dear Dolor,
but it makes me even more
determined I shall stand my ground
whilst others blithely mill around,
because, you see, it is my fate
to be the keeper of the gate
so that countless others may
take a verse upon their way.
๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜Š
You did not reply to my question regarding the poem forum. Is there a competition going on in there?

I have a poet friend too. He is now with other poets posting poems in a certain website. I'll try to ask him if there is a competition in there. Last time, he posted that having his name on the list of accepted poets in that website made him so happy.

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Hi, my friend, no, I don't think there's any kind of competition going on at the moment on this site...
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I have posted my third volunteer review but it is not reviewed by a moderator yet.

I wonder why you have not sent any review. @Lincolnshirelass
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I have posted my third volunteer review but it is not reviewed by a moderator yet.

I wonder why you have not sent any review. @Lincolnshirelass
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I have sent a review on historical fiction, but agree with you, dear Dolor, I should do more - it will help while the hours away whilst I am keeping watch here ...!!!
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Lincolnshirelass wrote: โ†‘15 Dec 2017, 07:14 I have sent a review on historical fiction, but agree with you, dear Dolor, I should do more - it will help while the hours away whilst I am keeping watch here ...!!!
Why was your review not posted on your profile?

I can't see any review on your profile.
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That's because it's not there, it's only in the historical fiction section. Sometimes I think I've not quite got the hang of this website yet!
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Lincolnshirelass wrote: โ†‘18 Dec 2017, 05:26 That's because it's not there, it's only in the historical fiction section. Sometimes I think I've not quite got the hang of this website yet!
Why won't you try sending another book review?
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