The Comment One Word to Make a Story Game
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Re: The Comment One Word to Make a Story Game
Henry looked out the window at all of the damage caused by marauding pirates and beserkers. Such damage can threaten one's very sanity having already experienced a devastating loss of thirteen valued Rangers just a fortnight before. The sight became clearer when the maelstrom abated and the street began to empty of human
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Should...should I use this one? Because...Cowgirl888 wrote:Barn.
There happened to appear a colossal storm and rain fell hard upon the rooftop of the treetops of Paradise Towers. Henry looked out the window at all of the damage caused by marauding pirates and beserkers. Such damage can threaten one's very sanity having already experienced a devastating loss of thirteen valued Rangers just a fortnight before. The sight became clearer when the maelstrom abated and the street began to empty of human activity. When Henry saw what had been made of what he barn
...yeah...I...I think I'm gonna...you know...skip that one? Unless someone says otherwise. Just in case, I'll make two versions:
Version 1:
There happened to appear a colossal storm and rain fell hard upon the rooftop of the treetops of Paradise Towers. Henry looked out the window at all of the damage caused by marauding pirates and beserkers. Such damage can threaten one's very sanity having already experienced a devastating loss of thirteen valued Rangers just a fortnight before. The sight became clearer when the maelstrom abated and the street began to empty of human activity. When Henry saw what had been made of what he barn, which
Version 2:
There happened to appear a colossal storm and rain fell hard upon the rooftop of the treetops of Paradise Towers. Henry looked out the window at all of the damage caused by marauding pirates and beserkers. Such damage can threaten one's very sanity having already experienced a devastating loss of thirteen valued Rangers just a fortnight before. The sight became clearer when the maelstrom abated and the street began to empty of human activity. When Henry saw what had been made of what he feared
Take which one you will.
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