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There happened to appear a colossal storm and rain fell hard upon the rooftop of the treetops of Paradise Towers.
Henry looked out the window at all of the damage caused by marauding pirates and beserkers. Such damage can threaten one's very sanity having already experienced a devastating loss of thirteen valued Rangers just a fortnight before. The sight became clearer when the maelstrom abated and the street began to empty of human
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There happened to appear a colossal storm and rain fell hard upon the rooftop of the treetops of Paradise Towers. Henry looked out the window at all of the damage caused by marauding pirates and beserkers. Such damage can threaten one's very sanity having already experienced a devastating loss of thirteen valued Rangers just a fortnight before. The sight became clearer when the maelstrom abated and the street began to empty of human activity.
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There happened to appear a colossal storm and rain fell hard upon the rooftop of the treetops of Paradise Towers. Henry looked out the window at all of the damage caused by marauding pirates and beserkers. Such damage can threaten one's very sanity having already experienced a devastating loss of thirteen valued Rangers just a fortnight before. The sight became clearer when the maelstrom abated and the street began to empty of human activity. When
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There happened to appear a colossal storm and rain fell hard upon the rooftop of the treetops of Paradise Towers. Henry looked out the window at all of the damage caused by marauding pirates and beserkers. Such damage can threaten one's very sanity having already experienced a devastating loss of thirteen valued Rangers just a fortnight before. The sight became clearer when the maelstrom abated and the street began to empty of human activity. When Henry
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There happened to appear a colossal storm and rain fell hard upon the rooftop of the treetops of Paradise Towers. Henry looked out the window at all of the damage caused by marauding pirates and beserkers. Such damage can threaten one's very sanity having already experienced a devastating loss of thirteen valued Rangers just a fortnight before. The sight became clearer when the maelstrom abated and the street began to empty of human activity. When Henry saw
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There happened to appear a colossal storm and rain fell hard upon the rooftop of the treetops of Paradise Towers. Henry looked out the window at all of the damage caused by marauding pirates and beserkers. Such damage can threaten one's very sanity having already experienced a devastating loss of thirteen valued Rangers just a fortnight before. The sight became clearer when the maelstrom abated and the street began to empty of human activity. When Henry saw what
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There happened to appear a colossal storm and rain fell hard upon the rooftop of the treetops of Paradise Towers. Henry looked out the window at all of the damage caused by marauding pirates and beserkers. Such damage can threaten one's very sanity having already experienced a devastating loss of thirteen valued Rangers just a fortnight before. The sight became clearer when the maelstrom abated and the street began to empty of human activity. When Henry saw what had
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There happened to appear a colossal storm and rain fell hard upon the rooftop of the treetops of Paradise Towers. Henry looked out the window at all of the damage caused by marauding pirates and beserkers. Such damage can threaten one's very sanity having already experienced a devastating loss of thirteen valued Rangers just a fortnight before. The sight became clearer when the maelstrom abated and the street began to empty of human activity. When Henry saw what had been
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There happened to appear a colossal storm and rain fell hard upon the rooftop of the treetops of Paradise Towers. Henry looked out the window at all of the damage caused by marauding pirates and beserkers. Such damage can threaten one's very sanity having already experienced a devastating loss of thirteen valued Rangers just a fortnight before. The sight became clearer when the maelstrom abated and the street began to empty of human activity. When Henry saw what had been made
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There happened to appear a colossal storm and rain fell hard upon the rooftop of the treetops of Paradise Towers. Henry looked out the window at all of the damage caused by marauding pirates and beserkers. Such damage can threaten one's very sanity having already experienced a devastating loss of thirteen valued Rangers just a fortnight before. The sight became clearer when the maelstrom abated and the street began to empty of human activity. When Henry saw what had been made of
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There happened to appear a colossal storm and rain fell hard upon the rooftop of the treetops of Paradise Towers. Henry looked out the window at all of the damage caused by marauding pirates and beserkers. Such damage can threaten one's very sanity having already experienced a devastating loss of thirteen valued Rangers just a fortnight before. The sight became clearer when the maelstrom abated and the street began to empty of human activity. When Henry saw what had been made of what
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There happened to appear a colossal storm and rain fell hard upon the rooftop of the treetops of Paradise Towers. Henry looked out the window at all of the damage caused by marauding pirates and beserkers. Such damage can threaten one's very sanity having already experienced a devastating loss of thirteen valued Rangers just a fortnight before. The sight became clearer when the maelstrom abated and the street began to empty of human activity. When Henry saw what had been made of what he
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Cowgirl888 wrote:Barn.
Should...should I use this one? Because...

There happened to appear a colossal storm and rain fell hard upon the rooftop of the treetops of Paradise Towers. Henry looked out the window at all of the damage caused by marauding pirates and beserkers. Such damage can threaten one's very sanity having already experienced a devastating loss of thirteen valued Rangers just a fortnight before. The sight became clearer when the maelstrom abated and the street began to empty of human activity. When Henry saw what had been made of what he barn

...yeah...I...I think I'm gonna...you know...skip that one? Unless someone says otherwise. Just in case, I'll make two versions:

Version 1:
There happened to appear a colossal storm and rain fell hard upon the rooftop of the treetops of Paradise Towers. Henry looked out the window at all of the damage caused by marauding pirates and beserkers. Such damage can threaten one's very sanity having already experienced a devastating loss of thirteen valued Rangers just a fortnight before. The sight became clearer when the maelstrom abated and the street began to empty of human activity. When Henry saw what had been made of what he barn, which

Version 2:
There happened to appear a colossal storm and rain fell hard upon the rooftop of the treetops of Paradise Towers. Henry looked out the window at all of the damage caused by marauding pirates and beserkers. Such damage can threaten one's very sanity having already experienced a devastating loss of thirteen valued Rangers just a fortnight before. The sight became clearer when the maelstrom abated and the street began to empty of human activity. When Henry saw what had been made of what he feared


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There happened to appear a colossal storm and rain fell hard upon the rooftop of the treetops of Paradise Towers. Henry looked out the window at all of the damage caused by marauding pirates and beserkers. Such damage can threaten one's very sanity having already experienced a devastating loss of thirteen valued Rangers just a fortnight before. The sight became clearer when the maelstrom abated and the street began to empty of human activity. When Henry saw what had been made of what he feared, he
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