GIRL YOU'VE GOT YOU.

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shiwanisrivastva
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GIRL YOU'VE GOT YOU.

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Girl you've got those eyes...
Which can kill with a glance...
More effectively than a lance.

Girl you've got those tresses...
The dusky twilight of which...
Makes you beautifully rich.

Girl you've got that voice...
With such intense temptation...
That it becomes an addiction.

Girl you've got those palms...
With a promising touch...
To heal brokenness much.

Girl you've got those curves...
That to turn when you twist...
Even the chaste moon can't resist.

Girl you've got the charm...
To make people wonder...
That why do you make their hearts surrender.

Girl you've got the power...
To climb each hill...
Which they thought you never will.

Girl you've got the courage...
To meet each adversity...
Without any difficulty.

Girl you've got the patience...
To ignore what the haters say...
And continue progressing on your way.

Girl you've got the strength...
To come out of pain...
Each time with a gain.

Girl you've got those vibes...
To spread the bright dawn of positivity...
And wipe the dark negativity.

Girl you've got the mind...
Maturely wise to be right...
But never lets die, the childish delight.

Girl you've got a heart...
Which can't be won by all who endeavor...
But once won, its won forever.

Girl you've got more than a few...
You've got something really true...
Girl you've got you.
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Post by Cswright »

I love this. I feel that it is trying to motivate the subject to see what she is actually capable of and what she brings to the world that she cannot see yet. I love it! Thank you for sharing!
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Post by JhenneRhapsody1989 »

It is really a good poem. It makes me smile. And it is really gave a positive vibe specially to all ladies/women whose going to read this. :)
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