Dream On My Pillow
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Dream On My Pillow
Will you let me, in your dreams, follow?
A soul of make-believe, that's me,
Class A, romantic fool, per se
How about, giving me yours to sleep
Will in my sleep, dreams of you I'll keep?
In a world of bloom, beautiful
Flowers for all, so plentiful;
How about, if we both sleep on one?
Seemed better than all sleeping I've done,
Might you think, there's more to whine,
As dreams, of ours, might all entwine?
...To delineate the times that lovers miss,
...A thousand dreams can't beat a single kiss.
-reyvrex (Love Sonnet 107)
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Thanks.
...To delineate the times that lovers miss,
...A thousand dreams can't beat a single kiss.
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Thanks for commenting. This is just a simple rhyming exercise done years ago.
...To delineate the times that lovers miss,
...A thousand dreams can't beat a single kiss.
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...To delineate the times that lovers miss,
...A thousand dreams can't beat a single kiss.
-reyvrex (Love Sonnet 107)
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Thanks for visiting. I am for the simple things, I detest complications. lolLouanne Piccolo wrote: ↑11 Jan 2019, 11:27 That is beautiful! I'm not really a poetry person, but I can enjoy poems like yours which are simple but powerful. Well done!
...To delineate the times that lovers miss,
...A thousand dreams can't beat a single kiss.
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Forgot.ReyvrexQuestor Reyes wrote: ↑07 Jan 2019, 05:23 Just suppose that you took my pillow,
Will you let me, in your dreams, follow?
A soul of make-believe, that's me,
Class A, romantic fool, per se
How about, giving me yours to sleep
Will in my sleep, dreams of you I'll keep?
In a world of bloom, beautiful
Flowers for all, so plentiful;
How about, if we both sleep on one?
Seemed better than all sleeping I've done,
Might you think, there's more to whine,
As dreams, of ours, might all entwine?
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Do you think there is a need for the question? Thanks for passing by.Angul Sonti wrote: ↑27 Jun 2020, 06:43 so good. its like a desire to be able to be together and therefore such questions at the end.
...To delineate the times that lovers miss,
...A thousand dreams can't beat a single kiss.
-reyvrex (Love Sonnet 107)
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Haha, I like your comment -- forgot. This happens to me sometimes. I pressed the "Submit" button without first completing what I intended to write. Stay safe.Samwisekoop wrote: ↑10 Jun 2020, 18:39Forgot.ReyvrexQuestor Reyes wrote: ↑07 Jan 2019, 05:23 Just suppose that you took my pillow,
Will you let me, in your dreams, follow?
A soul of make-believe, that's me,
Class A, romantic fool, per se
How about, giving me yours to sleep
Will in my sleep, dreams of you I'll keep?
In a world of bloom, beautiful
Flowers for all, so plentiful;
How about, if we both sleep on one?
Seemed better than all sleeping I've done,
Might you think, there's more to whine,
As dreams, of ours, might all entwine?
...To delineate the times that lovers miss,
...A thousand dreams can't beat a single kiss.
-reyvrex (Love Sonnet 107)
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This is meant to be humorous. Thank you for your generous views.Samwisekoop wrote: ↑10 Jun 2020, 18:38 I love this! The rhyming pattern is fun, but the subject is beautiful. The lines are sometimes a little hard to follow, but that is part of what makes them captivating. I love the idea of sharing the pillow's dreams and all that! Very creative and inspiring! And I just absolutely love the first line! How it shyly and hesitantly presents the idea of the whole poem drew me in! Well done!
...To delineate the times that lovers miss,
...A thousand dreams can't beat a single kiss.
-reyvrex (Love Sonnet 107)