To my amazing husband

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breleah98
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I promise:

I promise to always love you
From the beginning this I knew
I promise we'll be together til' the end
Because of you my heart will mend
I promise until death do us part
I love you darling, with all my heart💖
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Very sweet, simple, and short. Perhaps offering more insight to what you love about him; his uniqueness, the things that make him, him. Congratulations on finding a husband you love and adore :)
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