The Captive

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thisgirl818
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The Captive

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Where am I without you?
You've tainted my world
I couldn't touch anything
Without feeling low and filthy
You rob me my innocence
And left me utterly speechless
I'm laughing at this craziness
You came to me
With black ink in your hands
And blood in your lips
As curious as I was
I walked into the door
To that filthy, lustful world
You proudly created
I loved the pain you caused me
At first the excitement
Was thrilling to the unimaginable
But then constant turns to plain pain
And I no longer understand
Why constant submission
Felt so unreal and numbing
After 10 years I broke free
I was free but never the same
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Post by ToluwAYY »

I do love this. It is easily interpreted and very relatable. It touched a spot in my heart.
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