Discernment

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Elevation...

The solitude of the night is not to be compared;
Its magnitude in its stillness can not be dared;
And the altitude of the peaky Batian is diminished;
In comparison, the loneliness is highly curved;
The enlightening smile and strength of a woman,is elevating.

The elevation is not to be taken for granted;
Enlightenment asks for exceedingly acceleration;
The Samson's hairy head can give you the head-ups;
Judge's soberness is a surpass of the drunkard's hiccups;
The chat box of the stuffy -is a concurring elevated sent box.

Parental roles doesn't start at the delivery;
Neither prenatal nor postnatal has it;
It begins when one start gestating;
Through the abdominal and labor pains;
That's when, SHE, starts elevating her infant.

The learner's umbra is at least the teacher's penumbra;
That's when stars start becoming rising meteors;
Never again, 'sitted and exhausted'falling stars;
The darkest and dullest corners perceive animation;
Awakening more lives than deaths in both habitats.

Every animal is her own lioness in its jungle;
And in their classification might curl its tail;
Both predator and prey submit in human-animal kingdom;
That create a state of confusion on who's who..
It's not until a nominated candidate is overthrown for an elected one.

In the world of elites-homo sapiens sapiens-
They fight to lose, sneeze inwardly to swallow and love to submit.
Consequently, they premature their informed decisions at their open wards;
By foolishly admitting lover boys to 'bake their stomach ' with a pitch.
They elevate their eyes and their minds after a five-year prematurity.
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