Love Sonnet 229

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ReyvrexQuestor Reyes
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Love Sonnet 229

Post by ReyvrexQuestor Reyes » 19 Oct 2018, 19:24

When trophies rained upon my neighbor's yard,
With not a trickle spilling down my lawn,
Seems that misfortune felt on me so hard,
Thru nights of darkness without hints of dawn;
Time pelted me with woes that I can't shake,
That filled my cup to fullness ever since
That day, this yoke my shoulders vowed to take,
That all my brows, with saline sweats, would rinse;
But lifeline bridged the sea, cast from your hands,
To fetch this castaway from raging waves,
At last in your embrace, I found drylands,
Your eyes, the guiding stars this sailor craves;
..... Let trophies rain, but love is what I've sought,
..... Or else, the sunshine, bright, that your love brought.
"In the beginning was the word.........John 1:1"

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Post by ReyvrexQuestor Reyes » 12 Nov 2018, 19:02

Correction, please: In the third line, please read fell instead of felt.

Thank you.
"In the beginning was the word.........John 1:1"

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