Disturbing Thoughts of a Night-shift Worker

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Daniel-book
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Disturbing Thoughts of a Night-shift Worker

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God forbid,
That while I am working my ass off during a night-shift,
Someone grossly stupid,
Is sinking his shaft inside my wife’s mid-rift.

Harsh judgment be passed,
On him who consecrates my matrimonial bed,
Let his generation be cursed,
Long after he is dead.
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Post by rupe10 »

Whoaaa!

Heaviness.

Hope, for you, that this is the stuff of fiction -- and also not your Spidey-senses tingling.

Also seems you'd be wishing a pox on ye that desecrates your matrimonial bed versus consecrates...But that's just my take...
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