Love and enchantment

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Kadisha25
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Love and enchantment

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You see me now you can only feel me but I'm invisible to the rest of the world
You are my lover so when any other suitors come your way I turn their heart ice cold
No one can entangle you in their petty love scheme that's destined to lose
I am the champion of the love game even though I refused to let you choose

Your eyes have been blinded to the other suitors or may I say jokers that dare not challenge me
I am all things magical casting my spells on these mortal jokers who refuse to realise you are not free
I send venom in their paths to ensure they stumble on their feet never reeling their way into your heart
These mortals stand no chance in battle of love that I have clearly won from the start

My soft kisses all over your body paint a work of art which complements your perfection
My gentle voice guides the moment for you to  transcend into a world of sexual explosion
You quench my thirst for your body when my taste buds are tantalized by your honey and sweetness
The moment my body touches yours it triggers a rhythm of satisfaction that we both tango to with bliss

You are my queen that sits elegantly on my throne while I continue casting spells on these mortals
I wave my wand to ensure the suitors stand back or if they approach they experience a dreadful fall
You thawed out the ice that froze my heart and it only beats to our secret rhythm when I think of you
I am your enchantress that fell head over heels for you from day one and I enjoyed the journey you took me through
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Damar Diallice
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Post by Damar Diallice »

the poem is captivating and the words used are not bombastic...Bravo!
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