A Feline's Schedule

[Emi_Review]

Wake at 3am
Wake up servants
Demand food
Eat food
Sleep
Sleep
Sleep
Go on daily hunt
Hunt
sh*t
Sleep
Sleep
Sleep
Grace servants with appearance
Play
Punish servants, claw, nip, hiss
Demand food
Eat food
Sleep
Sleep
Sleep.

[palilogy]

laughing at the sh*t line
i would remove the title or allude to the fact that it is a feline without directly saying so
creates intrigue

[Emi_Review]

laughing at the sh*t line
i would remove the title or allude to the fact that it is a feline without directly saying so
creates intrigue

Thank you, I didn't think too much about the title and the overall impact it could have on the poem but I see your point about creating the intrigue

[sarahmarlowe]

Cute! You captured the cat's day so well that it made me miss my cat who passed this year. After I read the "hunt" part, I remembered him bringing his kills to the porch. Yuck! But, he was so proud!

I like the repetition of "Sleep." That's what they love to do! I think it's perfectly fine the way you've written it. The only suggestion I have IF you want to revise is to get a little rhythm going with the verse.

Thank you so much for posting this for all the world to see! Keep writing!