Bush Sex

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Daniel-book
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Bush Sex

Post by Daniel-book » 02 Aug 2018, 12:57

Sex is sweet on a soft mattress in a bed-sitter,
Where you vibrate slowly with a rhythmic push,
But sex is ten times sweeter,
When done deep inside the bush!

Bush sex is sweeter because the air is cold and fresh,
Making you to go for long without a break,
The cold breeze pushes you deeper into her warm flesh,
And it gets sweeter especially when you are not interrupted by a venomous snake!

Not only is the green grass soft,
But it also tickles,
And as the climax transports you aloft,
Your release becomes epic as the girl giggles!

Or you can place her on a soft mound of sand,
Her vagina raised and her back placed on a log,
And as your penis swell and expand,
You release on her rapidly before you are chased by a warthog!

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Post by greenengr » 02 Aug 2018, 17:52

:) great!

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Post by palilogy » 05 Aug 2018, 10:20

Great material here =)
Very fun to read. I would consider editing the last lines of each stanza - just using one powerful punchline at the end or omitting the !

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