Timeless Inspiration

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Timeless Inspiration

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When the wind goes whimsical and tides turn erratic,
the hope of our togetherness keeps me safe;

When the day seems scorching devil and nights are gloomy terrain,
my roadblocks transform into torch lights, with the reminiscence of you;

Tiny... yet consistent drizzles of nature,
I often replicate them with our bond of perseverance;

When insalubrious fogs hover around,
the eternal camaraderie we share helps me empower.

It has been ages it seems that we have been associated
being nurtured by each other’s caress, trust and emotions;

I relish the treasure of the memories developing each day,
wishful to record a never ending story that time cannot erase.
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I want to know more- I want to see more of the author in this poem.
Less vague and more unique lines.
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