Use this forum to post poetry that you have written. This is for getting comments and constructive feedback. This is for original, creative works. You must post the actual text, no links. Only one poem per topic please.
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What I wouldn’t give to be a fly on the wall
A wallflower in this place that prides itself on inclusion
But there are furrowed brows,and sideways glances
Assimilation is discouraged.
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I'm not sure anything new is being said here that I haven't seen before.
Consider putting more of you into the poem.
Use specifics and examples =)