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Post by lattes_and_lit » 18 Jul 2018, 17:09

What I wouldn’t give to be a fly on the wall
A wallflower in this place that prides itself on inclusion
But there are furrowed brows,and sideways glances
Assimilation is discouraged.

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Post by palilogy » 20 Jul 2018, 09:55

I'm not sure anything new is being said here that I haven't seen before.
Consider putting more of you into the poem.
Use specifics and examples =)

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