The Hideous Star

[Hannahhhh]

they see her as the girl on the streets
they see her as the failure
they see her as the public humiliation

what they don't see;
is how big her heart is
what they don't see;
is how open her mind is
what they don't see;
is how she cries her eyes out
knowing that no matter how much she tries
she'll never live to the people's expectations

[Stephanie Elizabeth]

Never judge a book by its cover! Beautifully written.

[palilogy]

I'm not sure anything new is being said in this poem that I haven't seen before.
Perhaps describe the people more or the girl.
Use specifics =)

[LASERRR__371]

You should describe the accusations more.