EMOTIONS

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EMOTIONS

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Our eyes kissed,

...few distance away.

Mine was with longing so deep,

....buried under a straight face.

But I'm dying slowly inside,

... when I imagine you in the arms of another.

You spared a glance my way,

....with a far away look, clearly not seeing me.

But thinking of another warm arms.

You walked past me, as though I never existed in

your hearts before.

So crushed I feel,

... with arms wrapped tightly around myself,

I broke down with a deep heart wrenching sobs.

I mourn for what could have been between us.

The beautiful life we could have had together.

The seed of our love that could have brought a

blessing our way.

I turn to another waiting to love me,

and I realised the gift

You didn't know you gave me

A gift of hope to love again.
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Why does the speaker imagine their love in the arms of another?
Dig deeper in this poem. Use details - more then what is on the page.
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