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Mrs Mushtaq
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Post by Mrs Mushtaq » 07 Jul 2018, 08:58

Life has very mysterious qualities in itself.
Sometime it is beautiful and sometime it is gloomy.
It all depends what life gives u.
When everything is in favour of you it is beautiful.when something goes wrong then it's gloomy.

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Post by palilogy » 07 Jul 2018, 11:28

I wonder if you could go deeper into the poem
Consider using specifics =)

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