Use this forum to post poetry that you have written. This is for getting comments and constructive feedback. This is for original, creative works. You must post the actual text, no links. Only one poem per topic please.
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Life has very mysterious qualities in itself.
Sometime it is beautiful and sometime it is gloomy.
It all depends what life gives u.
When everything is in favour of you it is beautiful.when something goes wrong then it's gloomy.
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I wonder if you could go deeper into the poem
Consider using specifics =)