Desperate and Voiceless
- thisgirl818
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Desperate and Voiceless
I'm screaming voiceless once again
I close my eyes in the darkness
Hoping for something, anything, nothing
Silence embraces my very being
Lost in thought, lost in love
Finally I see the permanent damage
You did to me
If only you were a better man
I'd say I'd still be in love
Helpless in your every desire
- Kenyan23
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Your really good.
- marvy-link
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due to what the guy did to her she will find it hard to love again
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Why wasn't he a better man?
When did the speaker fall out of love?
Use details - less vague = better poem !
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