Stranded on the desert of love

[Abbas soni]

Stranded on the desert of love;
Afflicted she was;
Running out of resources;
For her death can be a cause;

With annals of past survivors;
She surely was aware;
Water of belief,she should hunt;
To survive such an arduous dare;

She'll face deception as hindrance;
A mirage of disbelief;
Perverting her,from the vital hunt;
Ending her survival in a brief;

She'll die; the death of hatred;
A tragic story to grief;
If she couldnt find; in the desert of love;
The water of belief.

[Humble8]

Thanks for this review. I really take time to read this article Stranded on the desert of love, I can say that she is confus or feeling lonelinesss due to furstration or lack of care.

[palilogy]

I want this poem to dig deeper...it's just on the surface.
I want to know more, specifics - less vague images- could really make this poem stand out.