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Beauty

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Beauty
*charm can fool you, and beauty can trick you.
*Beauty is determined more by the person looking at it.
*I am gorgeous in his eyes no matter what I think the mirror says!
*The secret of being beautiful is seeing yourself through god's eyes.
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Don't let fear overpower you!
When you are afraid, you are allowing fear to take control over you and your emotions.sometimes people just make you scared,so that you give into their commandments. We panic in every small thing.we don't think! We need to be relaxed so that we tackle every problems. We need to let love overpower fear! Don't let fear over take your emotions!
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I think there are some solid feelings and convictions here.
Although I'm wondering if any of this information is new and compelling.
Consider digging deeper and using specifics - stories, details, people.
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